You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

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Dear Sir, My name is Viraj Pandya and I am head physiotherapist at Fortis hospital. I am writing
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letter to get more information about the offer which you have proposed to our group regarding the social
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organiser. I want you to know that it will be my pleasure to work as an
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organiser in the UK. As I was going through the training manual on the website, I was thrilled to know that the programme is about
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injury management, which is my area of interest. I would be thankful if you could provide more information about
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roles, responsibility, and layout of the whole
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. Since the programme is about
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injury management I will be happier to inform you that I was a part of the Indian Hockey team for the past 6 years and travelled around the globe with the team to help them out in on-field injury management. After that, I have been a part of the Fortis hospital
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physiotherapy department, where I have helped many Olympic level athletes to date. So, I am assuming that as I am coming from a
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professional background I might be an eligible candidate for the particular social
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organiser. And, I am looking forward to know your reply. Thank you very much. Best Regards, Viraj Pandya
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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