The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree ?

The

e-commerce

trend is spreading in every corner of the world and

this

facility will gobble up purchasing stores in residential

areas

. I completely disagree that internet commerce will be replaced with available

shops

in cities or towns.

Initially

,

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essay will argue that product's quality and

then

insufficient internet access are major drawbacks of opting

teleshopping

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for teleshopping

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.

To begin

with, the

first

and foremost reason against

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e-commerce

is that the provided materials through

this

facility might not be long lasting. There are numerous things

need

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that need

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to be considered

such

as

product's

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the product's

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gurantee

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guarantee

,

manufacturer's

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the manufacturer's

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details and so forth. While doing shop online with attractive deals consumers do not give attention to these

all important

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issues.

As a result

, online

shopers

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shoppers

successfully

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the

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low quality

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low-quality

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goods to valuable customers and later they refute to exchange those materials. For

instanace

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instance

, a survey conducted recently by BBC News has revealed that 35% of the world consumers are

claming

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claiming

that they have lost their money due to faulty purchase through

online

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the online

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system.

Therefore

, the high quality of goods or services can be bought from local

shops

while visiting and inspecting.

Besides

, the

second

facts in favour of

town's

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the town's

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market is that the advancement of technology still not well developed in many countries. The access of the internet is unable to reach in proper condition in several regions.

Public

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The public

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of those

areas

have not any awareness to use the

e-commerce

technique.

Consequantly

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Consequently

,

shops

or supermarkets will be the focal point of citizens to get daily basis things.

For example

in rural

areas

infrastructure work of communication is not established well compare to urban places.

Hence

, lack of knowledge in computer or mobile shopping cannot diminish the popularity of regional

shops

. To conclude,

this

essay argued that even though teleshopping is escalating

nowadys

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nowadays

, consumers satisfaction and scarcity of online network in many

areas

are predominant reasons

of

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for

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failure

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the failure

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of

e-commerce

business.

Thus

, I strongly believe that

shops

would not be

shutdowned

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shutdown

by

e-commerce

from cities and towns in

nereby

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nearby

future.