The natural resources such as oil and fresh water are being used at an alarming rate . what problem does it cause how can we solve this problems?

Nowadays
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is
totaly
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totally
depens
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depends
depend
on energy
resourses
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resources
such
as mineral oil and drinking water. Since the times of
industrial
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revolution
petrolium
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petroleum
got an important role in every
humans
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life even he or she
doesnt
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doesn't
extect
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expect
extent
that fact. It uses in almost any kind of production.
This
trend has some negative results.
First
of all,
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of potential fuel placed
ungerground
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underground
is limited. A lot of
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researches revealed that humanity is close to
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end
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of all our oil supply. That fact in the future will cause
the
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unprecendented
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unprecedented
world crisis if we
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don't
reduces
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use
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of natural
resourses
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resources
.
Best
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way to avoid
such
problems is universal renewable energy
using
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.
Hence
, even now, any of us has
posibility
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possibility
to invest in eco-future by instaling solar panels at the roof of own house, by driving car powered with electricity produced by wind turbines.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • depletion
  • exploitation
  • exhaustion
  • conserve
  • sustain
  • mitigate
  • alternative
  • renewable
  • efficiency
  • renewable energy sources
  • water management
  • irrigation
  • drought-resistant crops
  • recycling
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • carbon footprint
  • renewable energy infrastructure
  • regulations
  • awareness campaigns
  • education programs
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