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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. Which are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society?

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In several parts of the world,
science
 is being ignored by
students
. The problem of ignorance of
science
subjects
 as
major
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a major
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 subject by adolescence could have
effect
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an effect
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 on
the
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society.
This
 essay will discuss possible reasons
of
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this
 problem and the effect on society.
Firstly
,
science
subjects
 are
difficult
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a difficult
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 area to choose
a main
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a main subject
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subjects
,
students
 who choose
science
subjects
need
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 to put some extra effort to
cape
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 up with studies. So the main reason why
students
 ignoring
science
subjects
 can be extra effort and stress. The survey conducted in 2011 by
UK
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the UK
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 chartered of education suggests that the main reason why teenagers not enough choose
science
subjects
in
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 stress. Adolescence
prefer
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 stress-free
subjects
 like business management and art.
Secondly
,
attraction
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the attraction
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 of
students
 towards other
subjects
instead
 of
science
 would create
shortage
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a shortage
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 in specialists field. There would fewer people in the field of
science
. It leads to
lack
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a lack
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 of unemployment.
Also
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 it brings to economical problems, the number of scientists will reduce and
number
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the number
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 of other specialists will increase so it brings to unemployment. To conclude,
the
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one of the main reasons
of
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for
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 ignoring
science
 by
students
 is
demand
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the demand
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of
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this
 field and
stress
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the stress
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 factors.
Also
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 it will affect
to
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the
society
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social
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 and
economic
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economy
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 of the country.
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