Some people prefer to live in the same place most of their life but others like to live in different places. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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live in
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native
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but others like to
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places
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different
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everyone
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to explore the world.
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from one
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to another
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not want to come out from
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comfort zone.
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live
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in the same
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for a long period of time they have close friends and good bonding with the
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.
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, senior citizen spent
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of time in permanent government jobs in that location and they have habitual for that environment.
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young
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to live in different
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beacuse
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because
it provides the chance to learn different languages and cultures of others.
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,youngsters have no
attachement
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attachment
with anyone
beacuse
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because
they are busy in working hours.
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,some cities are more expensive
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that way
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another place
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places
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for savings.Additional, if
person
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transfering
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transferring
their living
places
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, it helps to
mainatin
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maintain
the coping skills with any environment. To overview,live in
same
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place
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have only
few
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benefits but shifting
places
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have more weighted.Life is
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precious
so everyone
enjoy
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the single minute and
etablish
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establish
interpersonal relationship with
individauls
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individuals
of other community and
innovatations
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innovations
innovation
new things.
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