Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Is it a positive or negative development?

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Topic Vocabulary:

globalization
diversity
homogenization
cultural assimilation
global connection
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economic impact
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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Is it a positive or negative development?

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