Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings. Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land. What solution is better?

Overpopulation has led to a certain number of problems
such
as lack of food, depletion
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resources and especially the increasing demand for accommodations. Plenty
urban
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areas have
also
devised two possible solutions to the housing problem. Some have decided to construct higher and larger buildings while the others build
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on larger size lands. Personally, I believe that addressing
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crisis with gigantic constructions is more viable since the other option can wreak havoc upon the environment. Taller housings can
also
be called apartments and these are capable of accommodating hundreds of households. The building plan is thought to be compact since it does not consume the majority of space. Whereas, more floors can
also
be added
further
in the
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progress.
Additionally
, the strategy allows
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more efficient management. The city government can evaluate and allocate
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amount of
enery
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energy
usage to each home, which can tackle the arising problems with the
disappearing
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of natural resources.
However
,
this
policy is even more useful for countries with smaller lands.
For example
, Singapore has been known for its lack of
land masses
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and to compensate for
this
, the authorities here chose to build more apartments for its high population, allowing public services to spread more around the country. Creating more homes
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wider areas,
however
, will negatively influence the environment. As make allowances for more human accommodations, the natural habitats are destroyed and local species are probably extinct
as a result
.In fact, the world’s statistics reveal that deforestation is mostly caused by accommodation expansion
instead
of
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. House owners can
dispose
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their daily garbage anywhere as long as it is convenient for them
instead
of a general trash disposal site built around the apartment blocks.
This
will destroy the city sceneries and may lead to many infectious diseases that transmit airborne and waterborne. In Shanghai, the atmosphere is polluted not only by its industrial smoke but
also
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owners’ one. The air inflicts damage to individuals’ lungs and
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ordor
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odour
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order
to the surroundings. In conclusion, I believe that since mankind has been inflated their territory to
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nature, it is high time we compressed.
Therefore
,countries should allow more apartments built. As it
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to be the most possible solution to our ecosystem’s current status.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban density
  • sustainability
  • public transportation
  • green spaces
  • community connections
  • overcrowding
  • economic implications
  • infrastructure impact
  • maintenance costs
  • carbon footprint
  • compact city
  • habitat destruction
  • greenhouse gas emissions
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