Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings. Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land. What solution is better?

Overpopulation has led to a certain number of problems

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resources and especially the increasing demand for accommodations. Plenty

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areas have

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devised two possible solutions to the housing problem. Some have decided to construct higher and larger buildings while the others build

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on larger size lands. Personally, I believe that addressing

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crisis with gigantic constructions is more viable since the other option can wreak havoc upon the environment. Taller housings can

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be called apartments and these are capable of accommodating hundreds of households. The building plan is thought to be compact since it does not consume the majority of space. Whereas, more floors can

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be added

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in the

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progress.

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, the strategy allows

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more efficient management. The city government can evaluate and allocate

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amount of

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usage to each home, which can tackle the arising problems with the

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of natural resources.

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,

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policy is even more useful for countries with smaller lands.

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, Singapore has been known for its lack of

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and to compensate for

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, the authorities here chose to build more apartments for its high population, allowing public services to spread more around the country. Creating more homes

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wider areas,

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, will negatively influence the environment. As make allowances for more human accommodations, the natural habitats are destroyed and local species are probably extinct

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.In fact, the world’s statistics reveal that deforestation is mostly caused by accommodation expansion

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. House owners can

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their daily garbage anywhere as long as it is convenient for them

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of a general trash disposal site built around the apartment blocks.

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will destroy the city sceneries and may lead to many infectious diseases that transmit airborne and waterborne. In Shanghai, the atmosphere is polluted not only by its industrial smoke but

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owners’ one. The air inflicts damage to individuals’ lungs and

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to the surroundings. In conclusion, I believe that since mankind has been inflated their territory to

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nature, it is high time we compressed.

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,countries should allow more apartments built. As it

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to be the most possible solution to our ecosystem’s current status.