You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Lyn,
Hello,I have received the message you have sent me. Well, in my
opinion
I would suggest Add the comma(s)
,opinion
to try
getting a job Change the verb form
trying
first
until you have enough money to pursue the career that you want. To have a degree is indeed something you will be very proud of. Linking Words
However
, you will not be able to have fun and Linking Words
savor
every moment in the university if you are burden with your finances since both of Change the spelling
savour
you
parents have been unemployed.
Correct pronoun usage
your
Furthermore
, college is so expensive. Everything you do will need money for you to accomplishLinking Words
them
. If you will be employed, you will earn money and save for your college as well as the chance to support your family’s finances. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Moreover
, your working experience might be beneficial for you in the future.
Since your interpersonal skill is excellent and impressive when it comes to communication. I know for sure that you will be better if you choose a job like sales and marketing. I know that Linking Words
this
job suits you well and surely you will have fun along the way.
I hope Linking Words
this
letter finds you well.
With so much love,
RachelleLinking Words
Submitted by Rachelle Rotcaf on
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,