You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

Dear Lyn, Hello,I have received the message you have sent me. Well, in my
opinion
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I would suggest
to try
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trying
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getting a job
first
until you have enough money to pursue the career that you want. To have a degree is indeed something you will be very proud of.
However
, you will not be able to have fun and
savor
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every moment in the university if you are burden with your finances since both of
you
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your
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parents have been unemployed.
Furthermore
, college is so expensive. Everything you do will need money for you to accomplish
them
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apply
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. If you will be employed, you will earn money and save for your college as well as the chance to support your family’s finances.
Moreover
, your working experience might be beneficial for you in the future. Since your interpersonal skill is excellent and impressive when it comes to communication. I know for sure that you will be better if you choose a job like sales and marketing. I know that
this
job suits you well and surely you will have fun along the way. I hope
this
letter finds you well. With so much love, Rachelle
Submitted by Rachelle Rotcaf on

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Real-world experience
  • Practical experience
  • Financial independence
  • On-the-job training
  • Student loan debt
  • Personal growth
  • Professional networking
  • Career development
  • Skilled workers
  • Job market
  • Career goals
  • Immediate income
  • Professional relationships
  • Market demand
  • Defining interests
  • Educational investments
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