Some people think that it is necessary to travel to other places to learn about cultures . Other say that books , films and the internet can be used as a source of information about different cultures. Do you agree or disagree ?
Technology has updated a lot in
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days. Most Correct your spelling
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people
are preferring
online platforms to read Wrong verb form
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news
, instead
of buying newspapers
. Because they feel that it's the easy way to read the news
in their busy schedule. In my opinion, I will agree with this
statement. Firstly
, most of the people
are busy with their daily work. While
they don't
have much time to read the news
in the newspaper. So some news telling
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apps
were introduced like Times of India and Daily Hunt. These are the apps
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people
are using to read news
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also
. One of the best things about these apps
is Up-to-the-minute information. However
, these apps
provide information very quickly. These apps
will update the news
for
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, if any incident happened
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to
my mobile through Change preposition
on
this
app. Moreover
, these apps
were very helpful to people
. Secondly
, I think we don't
encourage newspapers
because they are an environmental hazard. However
, if we prefer newspapers
we don't
know the live news
which goes in
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, to print the newspaper we are killing so many trees everyday
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For instance
, my friend lives in a village. He prefers newspapers
to read the news
. One day the government announced that today is
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, In my opinion, on my
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news
. Moreover
, by reading news
on the internet
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