The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart given above shows the rating of the hotel’s customer service via questionnaire.

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was done by 100 guests who visited parkway hotel in the years 2005 and 2010. There was a tremendous increase in

rating

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the rating

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of excellent in the

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2010, compared

to2005

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to 2005

when it was just 5%, and

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shows an improvement in the hotel’s customer service.

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the negative ratings for poor and very poor declined

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a total of about 20%,in the

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2010

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those guests that were satisfied with the

hotels

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hotel's

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services

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higher in the

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2005 as against 2010.

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the

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2005 had a terrible rating ,and as

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would have led to a decrease in the number of visitors,

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there was an improvement in subsequent years which led to a high increase in the positive comments when it was later rated in

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2010.