The number of university graduates in present time

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The given line graph indicates how many
students
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completed their tertiary education between 1992 and 2007 in Canada. Overall, It is clear that
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the
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of graduates from Canada's universities had increased constantly, the
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of
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fell slightly during 1998-1999. In 1992, 70,000 male
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were graduated,
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, female
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were far ahead, with near 100,000 in the same year. From 1995, the
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of both sexes pupils started slightly declining, but after 2001, both male and female
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' numbers were on constant rise till the end, with more than 90,000 and 148,000 respectively.
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there was a little fluctuation in the numbers between 1999 and 20000, the
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of female
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were mostly declined in 1999. Another small fluctuation can be seen in the year 2004 when the
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of male graduates was 82,000, and females were near 128,000, which again gained momentum immediately after small hiccups. In the given period, more female
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were graduated than males.
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