In many places new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.

Nowadays the building of

homes

is extensively increasing than ever before.

However

, the available space for building

homes

are

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less in cities. So inevitably the

countryside

have

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to be used in order to meet the demand.

This

essay discusses the pros and cons of building

homes

in the

countryside

,

However

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I am a strong advocate of

this

topic. Concerning the adverse effects of building

homes

in the

countryside

, the most devastating one is

the

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pollution. The population of the world is growing at a phenomenal rate. Each and every person should have the right to have their own home. But

on the other

hand

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it should not be influenced to the other living things,

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deforestation can be seen almost everywhere in the world and that would lead to various problems

such

as droughts, landslides, creating of barren land and extinction of rare birds and animals which may end up with a catastrophe. Even though the population is growing up rapidly, the land area still remains the same. So inevitably we have to consider the building of

homes

in the

countryside

.

Thus

the government, companies and individuals should collaborate to overcome

this

heinous problem. .

This

vicious cycle will continue unless the authorized people foresee the catastrophic consequences. I believe that the

countryside

should only be touched after doing proper investigations. Ancestors saved the world for us and now the time has come to do our duty for future generations. To conclude, vertical settlements seems like the best solution to mitigate the above problem,

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people can reconsider the different approaches that they can do to deter the problem and the government could encourage the people who wish to do so.