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interview form the basic selection criteria for most large companies. however, some people think that an interview is not a reliable method of choosing whom to employ and there are other better methods. to what extent do you agree and disagree?

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 that most companies rely on
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interview
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an interview
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 for hiring
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 , whereas,
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 argued that dependence on
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the interview
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 is wrong and other
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 should be adopted as they are far better. In my opinion, the
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 proposition appears to be more rational as with it an employer can get information about skill and potential , while , other
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 may be included cheating as well as they are time
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 the recruiters can get an idea about the personality as well as social skills of the
employees
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. In interviews , there is face-to-face interaction in which individual
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 to answer impromptu questions, from which personality can be judged. Another striking benefit in
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 can judge traits like
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 to handle pressure and
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 to think and take
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 in an adverse situation.
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 as , all multinational companies
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worldwide prefer to work with
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 who are capable and have all the skills which are required for
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 of the organisation so they opted
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interview
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 as they can interact with the candidate. Probing ahead, one of the main underlying reason
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 from the fact is that other
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 and lengthy which
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consists
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. In
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 test , which is good to judge
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theoretical
 knowledge of the person,
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,
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 idea can not give hint about
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the personality
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 of the candidate.
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, written tests
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 fallible to cheating as sometimes employee can take outside help.
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, in public sector government conduct exam for various posts , to get
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eligible
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candidates
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,
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, some authorities leak the exam and pass the unable
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candidates
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 reasons mentioned above it can be clearly stated that why many are against
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 . To conclude, according to the
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arguments
 aforementioned above , one can reach to a conclusion that
interview
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 is the considered most prominent way for hiring
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employees
 as it
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 advantages over commonly adopted
methods
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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