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Some people want academic subjects such as history and physics to be taught at secondary school. Others want practical skills such as mechanical and gardening to be taught. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Educating the younger generation is the responsibility of the government. People have a different opinion on whether the secondary school students should be educated the core
subjects
such
 as History and Physics or vocational training, gardening or mechanic. I, personally, support the former’ s view since it lays a foundation for the pupils’ future learning. On the one hand, supporters of the basic subject teaching point out that
this
 would provide a better understanding of
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science behind various machines, natural truth and practicality of various
subjects
 in our day to day life. I strongly support the view.
Additionally
, by securing these kinds of information, would motivate the learners to adopt
these knowledge
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 into their life and encourage to undertake
a
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vocational training to secure a decent
job
.
For example
, currently,
the
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most of the school curricula
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to include
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 the core
subjects
,
instead
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job oriented
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 classes in the senior students’ syllabus.
On the other hand
, opponents of the above- mentioned argument consider while educating the novice with
job
 oriented training can enable them to secure a decent
job
 at their very young age. Even though
this
 seems to be a good initiative, the success rate out of
this
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. The youngsters may not be mature enough to undertake
such
 educational sections, so they rarely outshine in that educational program. In conclusion, even though people are divided about what kinds of
subjects
 need to be taught at senior level either core
subjects
 or practical skills, I consider learning the fundamental
subjects
 would be useful for the pupils than
job
 oriented
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