Many students around the world don’t choose science subjects at university. Give the reasons for this and describe the impact on the community?
In current society, students globally avoid choosing scientific-related subjects. In the following essay, I will share some of the reasons for
this
trend and explain how it impacts the community.
Universities around the globe have experienced how dramatically pupils have dropped from science subjects. The reasons behind that it is thought to be related to the difficulty of the subject and the high cost of the programs in this
career. To illustrate further
, a close friend of the family started his studies in chemistry last
year. Unfortunately, due to
the overwhelming complexity of the subject, He was sleeping an average of 4 hours a day, which sometimes was not enough to pass some of his exams and deliver his assignments on time. Another aspect that he used to be concerned about was the high cost of the specializations that
were about 30000 dollars yearly.
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For example
, South America experienced a critical fall in their GDP during the last
decade due to
the reduction in productivity in highly developed technologies since they lack
the human resource that could produce them.
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To conclude
, reasons for students getting into other subjects of study different from science are based mainly on the high degree of difficulty and the high tuition fees that learners have to pay to continue in that area of specialization. On the other hand
, this
phenomenon harms the community by affecting the economy of a nation.Submitted by osw79924 on
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