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Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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Some
people
 believe that it is good for
students
 to teach them about
food
 in
school
 while others think that
students
 should
study
 important
subjects
 in
the
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school
.From my point of view, I do not totally agree with both opinions. On the one hand,
students
 should learn about the
science
 of
food
 and how to prepare it.
Food
 is one of the most important parts of
people
’s
life
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, there are a lot of advantages if
people
 know more about
food
. If
students
 are good at the
science
 of
food
, they can live independently, without support from others.
For example
, understanding why
people
 need
food
, and how
food
 affects
people
 in a good way or bad way will help
people
 be aware of which kind of
food
 they should choose to have a healthy life.
Moreover
, in the future, with population growth, there is not enough
food
 for humans, the
knowledge
 about
food
 and how to create new
food
 is the key in history. It is crucial to get more
knowledge
 about the
science
 of
food
 to resolve an issue about the lack of
food
 in the world in the future.
On the other hand
, it is important to
study
 other
science
subjects
 in
the
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school
.
Besides
 eating, there are many other works that
people
 have to do in their life
,
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 and to do these works,
people
 need to know about them.
For example
,
students
 should
study
 Math in
school
, because without Math, they can not buy or sell something.
Students
also
 should have
knowledge
 about
foreing
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foreign
 languages that help them to talk to
people
 from many countries in the world. All of the
subjects
 that
students
study
 in
school
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 are crucial,
school
 time is the best time to learn about them. In general,
food
 and other sciences
subjects
 are important to
people
.
Students
 should
study
 all of them, and
then
, when they feel interested in any field, they can go deeper to get more
knowledge
.
Students
 should not only focus on either
food
 or other sciences.
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