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Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in group while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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also
 my opinion. On one side, many
people
 prefer
group
study
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This
 will make understanding
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the topics easy. And
also
this
 will help to cover the topic
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quickly
 as all the
people
 in the
group
 express their point of view and
also
 they can divide the topic among them and teach each other in
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 effective way.
For instance
, Many
people
 in colleges
study
 one night before the exam. For these
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group
 studies will help them learn things quickly. On the other side,
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study
 will help you to habituate to explore things on your own and
also
 will improve your skills.
For example
, Each IT employee should develop their skills as per present latest technology. So everyone should do their
study
 on their own. There are
people
 who can guide you when required, but not always. So it is good to get
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 habituated. And
study
 which is earned by their own research will never be
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 beneficial.
Group
study
 will help to capture things quickly but not as accurate as
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study
 does.
First
 , it is good to have a
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study
 on your own and followed with
group
study
.
This
 process will help to get the topic revised once before the exam which will result
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 a good score. In conclusion, It is good to be more
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 being dependent on others. So always prefer to go with
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study
instead
 of
group
study
. Both are good ways to
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stay
 , but
study
 on own is more accurate and effective than a
group
.
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