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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subject in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society?

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Science
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 is a pretty essential
subject
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 for all the primary
students
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 worldwide as it provides basic knowledge of the objects and things related to day-to-day life. If a person wants to study more about
science
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, they tend to go to
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university, while others choose to observe different subjects. As we can see currently, most
students
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 do not choose
science
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 subjects in university in many countries. The main reason is that
science
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 requires special knowledge and skills to innovate and understand the essential elements. It is
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 more complex rather than doing any other
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. The
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 reason is that the
students
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 think the
science
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 will be pretty dull since they always have to be in the lab doing observations. The final supporting reason is time because most
students
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 tend to learn subjects without spending much time. But obviously,
science
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 requires patience and tolerance. If
students
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 do not choose
science
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to begin
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 their careers, there will be some adverse effects on society. The direct impact is a shortage of employers related to
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,
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 as Doctors, chemists, Environmental scientists, Geoscientists, and Hydrologists.
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, without those employers, the world will not exist as they do
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 jobs to our society.
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, there will be no mentors to recreate the new generation as scientists, leading to an enormous impact on the whole world.
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, I firmly believe
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 is the best
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 globally because it helps create innovations, medicines, and materials. The responsibility is that the pre-schools should encourage and teach the
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's value, which will lead enough
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 to choose
science
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subject
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 soon.
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