Some people think that several short holidays from school are better, while others think one long summer holiday for the year is better for children. Discuss both views and include your own opinion and relevant examples from your experience.
Holiday
is the best entertainment to Add an article
The holiday
A holiday
every
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everyone
one
whether short, long it does not matter. A fair amount of people say that many mini school leave
Change to a plural noun
leaves
are
better but others think that we will not need many short Change the verb form
is
layoff
we would like to enjoy Change to a plural noun
layoffs
one
long year
holiday
. I will discuss both views point and, finally
I would give my opinion about Add a comma
,finally
this
statement.
To begin
with,
short is always sweet compare to long. we want several Remove the comma
apply
holiday
from Change to a plural noun
holidays
school
Change the noun form
schools
such
as festival leave, Independence leave, and etc. Moreover
, children can get more leave from their institution with in
Correct your spelling
within
one
year
in order to make happy
and take Correct pronoun usage
them happy
rest
. Correct article usage
a rest
Furthermore
, nowadays many pupils have more study depressionAdd the comma(s)
, therefore,
therefore
less holiday
can feel relax to study. In addition
, continueous
school days Correct your spelling
continuous
may
Correct your spelling
maybe
be get
bore Change the verb form
get
hence
some student do not focus on their study. Therefore
, short evacuation is always better.
However
, most people would like to take a long
Correct the article-noun agreement
a long year holiday
long year holidays
year
holidays. Because we are able to plan any tourist place in lon days only not a short. Moreover
, summer
Change preposition
during summer
holiday
time many scholl conducting coaching class for next
level class especially grade
ten and twelve adolescent. Change preposition
for grade
In
addition
an offspring are being studied without taking any break Add a comma
,addition
with in
Correct your spelling
within
one
year
so they must feel enjoy to their long leave even they must want to take break
. Add an article
a break
This
can lead to healthy
life without stress level. Add an article
a healthy
For example
, the Indian education system is given long
time summer Correct article usage
a long
holiday
for all pupils when middle april
to may month full almost 45 days. Change the capitalization
April
Therefore
, students and parents are arranged to visit many historical place
.
To conclude, less Change to a plural noun
places
holiday
is making temporary happy but long
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the long
a long
holiday
is making permanant
enjoy and satisfaction. Correct your spelling
permanent
However
, in my opinion about this
huge vacation leave are best and more comfortable. Because we can enjoy without any panic and sadness. Meanwhile
many Add a comma
,Meanwhile
government
is arranged Change to a plural noun
governments
potanical
garden festival especially Correct your spelling
botanical
child
. If you take many Add an article
a child
the child
layoff
you will be strong and Change to a plural noun
layoffs
energytic
when after Correct your spelling
energetic
completition
vacation.Correct your spelling
competition
completion
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