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Some people think that economy progress is the only way to measure a country's success, while others think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country's success. What are these factors? Which, of all factors,do you think are most important?

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Economic
progress
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 aids countries to be in a better position. But most people disagree that economic
progress
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 is the only way to measure a
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country
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’s
success
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. In
this
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 essay, I will discuss the common
factors
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 and the most critical
factors
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 related to the
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country
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’s
success
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. Predominantly, the economy is the main factor affecting the
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country
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’s
success
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,
for example
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, import and export, (GNI) Gross National Income, and (PPP) Purchasing Power Parity.
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, some people believe that some other
factors
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 can be used to measure,
such
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 as
quality
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 of living, sports, living costs, and natural
resources
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. These common
factors
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 will vary from
country
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 to
country
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, and it depends on how they managed the
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country
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’s
success
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. From all of these, the most important
factors
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 are
quality
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 of living and natural
resources
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;
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, the USA, UK, Australia, and Canada can maintain
quality
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 of living long before because they always manufacture
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quality
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 items for their locals the export purposes. When we discuss natural
resources
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, most Asian countries have their
resources
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. But they failed to take maximum advantage due to the inferior technology. Qatar became the wealthiest
country
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 in the world as they produce Oil and Gas globally. The above two
factors
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 are significantly affecting to
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country
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’s
success
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. In conclusion, the facts we have discussed above are all related to the
country
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's economic
progress
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. If the
country
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 has natural
resources
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 and the proper technology, there will be automatic
progress
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 of other
factors
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.
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