Mony peopre nowodctys do nol feel sofe either when they ore al home or go out. Whol ore lhe reosons ond whol con be done lo solye this problem?
There is no doubt that an increasing number of
people
feel unsafe, not only when they go out somewhere, but also
when they are at home. There are several factors, which have
lead to Add the particle
tohave
this
increasing fear. ln this
essay, I will look into the causes of this
and suggest some solutions.
The reasons why people
are afraid of going out of their homes
are very obvious. The crimes
committed on the streets
,
are on a rise. The road mishaps have risen to a proportion, more than ever before and continue to increase Remove the comma
apply
everyday
. Some Replace the word
every day
people
are afraid to go out because of the fear of natural calamities and also
, sometimes due to health related
disorders, which might be caused due to the increase in pollution. The reports of bombings and terror attacks have become everyday news. Add a hyphen
health-related
As a result
, people
feel afraid of stepping out of their homes
.
At the same time, people
are also
becoming increasingly scared within their homes
. The main reason for this
is the escalation in the crimes
being committed at homes
, like murders, robberies, etc. ln a recent news article, it has been surveyed that there have been more crimes
committed by domestic help at people
's homes
, than the crimes
being committed on the streets
. This
has led to people
feeling vulnerable, at home and when they are out on the streets
.
There are certain steps, which can be taken, by the government and individuals, to make people
more safe and protected. The increasing unemployment is the main reason of
these Change preposition
for
crimes
. lf the youth of a country are provided vocational training and good job opportunities, they would not fall on the path of crime. Another important measure, which needs to be taken by the Sovernment
, is to employ more Correct your spelling
Government
security
measures, like cameras, more police patrolling, and more security
in public transport and public areas. This
needs to be done in the residential and commercial areas, both,
so that it deters the criminals and Remove the comma
apply
instills
a sense of Change the spelling
instils
security
in the public. For instance
, in Bengaluru, Sovernment
has now made it compulsory for all showrooms and shops to install Correct your spelling
Government
security
cameras. There are also
random checks made by the government officials to ensure that the security
standards are met in all commercial areas-
To add to it, stricter punishments for the offenders will act as a major deterrent for the criminals. This
will greatly reduce the incidents of crimes
on the streets
and at home. Another important measure is the use of technology in the security
systems installed at homes
. People
can install advanced alarm systems and security
cameras in their homes
, to avoid any unwanted incidents of crime. This
also
helps greatly in the reduction of domestic crimes
.
To sum it up, people
's fear and insecurity is justified, with the increasing reports of crime reported by the media. However
, this
situation can be mitigated by taking some measures, like tackling the unemployment problem, tiShtened
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tightened
security
measures, stricter punishments and the use of advanced technology in households and commercial areas.Submitted by nuha on
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