Mony peopre nowodctys do nol feel sofe either when they ore al home or go out. Whol ore lhe reosons ond whol con be done lo solye this problem?

There is no doubt that an increasing number of

people

feel unsafe, not only when they go out somewhere, but

also

when they are at home. There are several factors, which

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lead to

this

increasing fear. ln

this

essay, I will look into the causes of

this

and suggest some solutions. The reasons why

people

are afraid of going out of their

homes

are very obvious. The

crimes

committed on the

streets

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are on a rise. The road mishaps have risen to a proportion, more than ever before and continue to increase

everyday

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. Some

people

are afraid to go out because of the fear of natural calamities and

also

, sometimes due to

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disorders, which might be caused due to the increase in pollution. The reports of bombings and terror attacks have become everyday news.

As a result

,

people

feel afraid of stepping out of their

homes

. At the same time,

people

are

also

becoming increasingly scared within their

homes

. The main reason for

this

is the escalation in the

crimes

being committed at

homes

, like murders, robberies, etc. ln a recent news article, it has been surveyed that there have been more

crimes

committed by domestic help at

people

's

homes

, than the

crimes

being committed on the

streets

.

This

has led to

people

feeling vulnerable, at home and when they are out on the

streets

. There are certain steps, which can be taken, by the government and individuals, to make

people

more safe and protected. The increasing unemployment is the main reason

of

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these

crimes

. lf the youth of a country are provided vocational training and good job opportunities, they would not fall on the path of crime. Another important measure, which needs to be taken by the

Sovernment

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Government

, is to employ more

security

measures, like cameras, more police patrolling, and more

security

in public transport and public areas.

This

needs to be done in the residential and commercial areas, both

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so that it deters the criminals and

instills

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a sense of

security

in the public.

For instance

, in Bengaluru,

Sovernment

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Government

has now made it compulsory for all showrooms and shops to install

security

cameras. There are

also

random checks made by the government officials to ensure that the

security

standards are met in all commercial areas- To add to it, stricter punishments for the offenders will act as a major deterrent for the criminals.

This

will greatly reduce the incidents of

crimes

on the

streets

and at home. Another important measure is the use of technology in the

security

systems installed at

homes

.

People

can install advanced alarm systems and

security

cameras in their

homes

, to avoid any unwanted incidents of crime.

This

also

helps greatly in the reduction of domestic

crimes

. To sum it up,

people

's fear and insecurity is justified, with the increasing reports of crime reported by the media.

However

,

this

situation can be mitigated by taking some measures, like tackling the unemployment problem,

tiShtened

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tightened

security

measures, stricter punishments and the use of advanced technology in households and commercial areas.