Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?
Every person dreams
has
Change the verb form
have
a
own Change the article
an
car
. Nowadays most people are achieved their dream like
has Correct your spelling
dreamlike
car
. Add an article
a car
the car
However
, car
holding population are dramatically increased over the Correct article usage
the car
last
three decades and we can see that. Even though inevitably now many cities are being faced huge congestion on the road
to around the world. Undoubtedly this
statement is accurate and in this
essay
I would explain what are the measures are taken Add a comma
,essay
governmenent
in Correct your spelling
government
order
to reduce car
users.
To begin
with, there are many reasons for increasing traffic on road
. Firstly
, most
public Add an article
the most
are
moved to urban area for their needs and wants. Change the verb form
is
Therefore
, automatically city population is increased in order
to they have to use
own vechiles
for their work and personal purpose so traffic Correct your spelling
vehicles
vehicle
are
uncontrolled many smart cities. Change the verb form
is
Secondly
, all the fecilities
are available in Correct your spelling
facilities
city
Add an article
the city
such
as malls, cinema halls, hospitals, banks and etc. This
is the
another reason for Remove the article
apply
increase
the congestion because they always comes
and goes from village to city. Change the verb form
come
Finally
, most
person prefers to Add an article
a most
the most
use
the highway road
due to speed and road
condition hence
they can reach early for their destination and this kinds
of Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
road
only can drive fast and speed with the regulation and Add an article
the road
vechiles
Correct your spelling
vehicles
also
driving very smoothly compare to normal
Add an article
a normal
road
.
Moreover
, government
should take steps to reduce Add an article
the government
car
users in order
to will diminish this
congestion trouble. Firstly
, the government must increase
the car
price in order
to folks are not liked to purchase cars. Secondly
, the fuel price will drastically increase
while people does
not prefer to travel Change the verb form
do
by
their own four wheels. Most importantly government should encourage to Change preposition
on
use
public transfortation
Correct your spelling
transportation
transformation
such
as trains, bus and ministry also
provides
Change the verb form
provide
best
quality of public transportation and Change the article
the best
increase
the vechiles
size and number to their citizen. Correct your spelling
vehicles
Finally
, Correct your spelling
ruling
rulling
party will encourage Correct article usage
the rulling
to
the people will Change preposition
apply
use
bicycle
.Add an article
a bicycle
the bicycle
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
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