During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. He suggested you should contact him for a possible job opportunity. Write a letter to remind him about meeting and your interest in a job and why you think you are suitable

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I am privileged to have a chance to get familiar with you, an international businessman, who is

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a down earth person. I would wonder if you remember me, an Italian girl who negotiated for an aisle seat on an

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flight. Having an invitation from you for the opening ceremony of a chain restaurant, surely delighted me. But, I was enforced to return to France immediately and

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I have decided to write a letter.

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is to say, as you have announced for a professional chef I would say Making Italian authentic dishes around 10years is my main skill. Not to mention, I have been training a range of online courses within the framework of backing cookies, as well. Your well—known restaurants in the European countries would be an opportunity not only for me but

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for all chefs to reach a dream job.

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, I kindly request you to give me a chance for being a part of your team serving Italian cuisines. If you had any vacancies in France, I could be there as an executive chef.

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is because I have enough experience and certifications to be qualified for

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. Thank you for your consideration and hope to hear from you. Yours sincerely,

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

208 words

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During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. He suggested you should contact him for a possible job opportunity. Write a letter to remind him about meeting and your interest in a job and why you think you are suitable

The Greeting

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Many people choose to travel abroad to learn a foreign language instead of studying in their home town. Do the advantages of learning a new language in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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