A serious problem affecting countries right across the globe is the lack of water for drinking, washing and other household uses. Why do many countries face water shortage and what could be done to alleviate this problem?

Next to the air,
water
is the most important element for the preservation of life. In the
last
decade, lack of
water
has become a serious problem which directly affects human being's life. In
this
essay, I will discuss the possible causes and remedies to overcome
this
issue.
Water
scarcity
brought
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on by a combination of ignorance and mismanagement. One of the main
cause
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causes
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of the issue is flooding
irrigation
in traditional farming.
That is
to say, in some arid countries like Iran, agriculture accounts for around 80 per cent of total
water
usage. Despite the fact that Iran is an arid country, most farmers still rely on traditional methods which waste around 60 per cent of the
water
used and date back centuries like flooding
irrigation
or
plant
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trees that thrive with
water
. One way to alleviate
this
subject by the government would be to empower farmers to set up a drip
irrigation
system that can save up to 80 per cent more
water
than conventional
irrigation
and can even contribute to more
crops
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yields.
Moreover
, it should be compulsory to use
crops
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species that are native to arid regions and are naturally drought-tolerant. Another obvious reason for
this
problem is household wastewater.
In other words
, the average person unknowingly wastes up to 30 gallons of
water
every day.
This
problem could be addressed by launching a publicity campaign in the media and in schools to educate people about how to use less
water
in our daily
life
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.
For example
, by turning off the faucet
while
doing oral care or watering the plants in the evening to minimize
the
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evaporation.
To conclude
, more than 180 million people are now affected by
water
poverty. The responsibility of tackling
this
concern lies not only in the hands of citizens but
also
requires the Agriculture
Ministry
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help. Action must be taken urgently unless we will face catastrophic results in the future.
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