A serious problem affecting countries right across the globe is the lack of water for drinking, washing and other household uses. Why do many countries face water shortage and what could be done to alleviate this problem?
Next to the air,
water
is the most important element for the preservation of life. In the last
decade, lack of water
has become a serious problem which directly affects human being's life. In this
essay, I will discuss the possible causes and remedies to overcome this
issue.
Water
scarcity brought
on by a combination of ignorance and mismanagement. One of the main Add a missing verb
is brought
cause
of the issue is flooding Fix the agreement mistake
causes
irrigation
in traditional farming. That is
to say, in some arid countries like Iran, agriculture accounts for around 80 per cent of total water
usage. Despite the fact that Iran is an arid country, most farmers still rely on traditional methods which waste around 60 per cent of the water
used and date back centuries like flooding irrigation
or plant
trees that thrive with Replace the word
planting
water
. One way to alleviate this
subject by the government would be to empower farmers to set up a drip irrigation
system that can save up to 80 per cent more water
than conventional irrigation
and can even contribute to more crops
yields. Change the noun form
crop
Moreover
, it should be compulsory to use crops
species that are native to arid regions and are naturally drought-tolerant.
Another obvious reason for Change the noun form
crop
this
problem is household wastewater. In other words
, the average person unknowingly wastes up to 30 gallons of water
every day. This
problem could be addressed by launching a publicity campaign in the media and in schools to educate people about how to use less water
in our daily life
. Fix the agreement mistake
lives
For example
, by turning off the faucet while
doing oral care or watering the plants in the evening to minimize the
evaporation.
Correct article usage
apply
To conclude
, more than 180 million people are now affected by water
poverty. The responsibility of tackling this
concern lies not only in the hands of citizens but also
requires the Agriculture Ministry
help. Action must be taken urgently unless we will face catastrophic results in the future.Change noun form
Ministry's
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