Some people believe that good teamwork is what makes companies successful . Others feel that it is more important to have a good leader . Discuss both views and give your opinion .

Despite

of

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the fact that some people think that

development

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of

companies

depends on desirable

team

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teamwork

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work

, sometimes it is

belief

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the belief

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that having a proper

leader

is essential in businesses successfully. In the following essay , both of the ideas will be discussed . Increasing staff and workers determinations in a workplace would be the power-full reason of seeming teamwork influentially in progressed or improvement if

companies

. Apparently , if colleagues have a pleasant injunction with each other in their

work

environments ,

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of motivation in them(staff) will

increased

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and

then

so , they will be encouraged to do their tasks with more quality and services in

companies

will be more desirable .

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, when services in

a

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marketing

is

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improved , people will

satisfied

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with

this

company

and it indicates successfully of the

company

.

For instance

, it is reported from news in the world that ,

team

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teamwork

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work

has been known as the strongest reason of progressed and successfully in marketing and businesses and amount of satisfaction in these

companies

has

rose

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.

On the other hand

, the reason

of

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people

who

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feel that

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leader

in

companies

is more profitable than other factors would be the fact that , a business can not be successful , unless by

a

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strong or professional management . Obviously , a successful

company

needs a

power-full

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manager or a

leader

that protects and support his/her staff .

Moreover

, if there is not observation , protection and

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in worker’s tasks , they will be confused and no one will not be able to do their duties correctly .Because every person has a responsibility in a

company

which

it

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is shown , controlled and managed by a

leader

. So , without and desirable manager , tidy

in

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work

environments will

decreased

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and

this

company

can not be developed . In conclusion ,

however

, having a beneficial

leader

has

positive

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a positive

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influence on development , improvement and

progressed

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progress

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in

companies

, in my view , teamwork and assistance would be important rather than a good

leader

in quality of organizations .