According to the World Health Organization, all international travel should end until the coronavirus has gone . Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Coronavirus
is an infectious disease caused by
newly
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the newly
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discovered
corona
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coronavirus
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virus
.According to the World Health Organization,all international
travel
should end until the
coronavirus
gone
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went
is gone
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.Personally,I
completly
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completely
agree with
this
idea.
This
essay will discuss the reasons why we should not
travel
during the
virus
is raging.
First
,
people
should not
travel
when
coronavirus
is viral because many
people
congregate in the same place,the
coronavirus
will transmit from person to person so the disease is very hard to control.
Coronavirus
becomes
outbreak
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an outbreak
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and millions of
people
get
virus
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a virus
the virus
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.
On the other hand
,
conducing
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conducting
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the movement will protect
human’safety
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human safety
from spreading
virus
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the virus
a virus
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As the result of the pandemic,many
countries
and regions imposed
quaratines
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quarantines
quarantine
,entry bans or other restrictions,either for citizens,recent travellers to
affected
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the affected
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area.Some
countries
have lots of measures to considerably reduce
tranmissions
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transmissions
transmission
.
First
,
people
are allowed to
travel
other
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countries
when they have already injected
vaccine
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the vaccine
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.
Second
,when
people
travel
to other
countries
,they have to test their blood to check
them
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they
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are positive or negative with Covid-19.
Moreover
,they must
quaratine
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quarantine
in two weeks.
Inconclusion
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,
people
should not
travel
during the
virus
is happening because it will spread the
virus
in
community
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the community
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.
People
should inject vaccine before they go to other
countries
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