Working abroad can help employees earn a great deal of money and gain more benefits. However, some people think this trend has many negative impacts. What are the advantages and disadvantages of working abroad.

The innumerable
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job
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resulted in people started to move abroad to earn better than what they are being offered as a payscale in their own
country
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ease in
immigration
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process and demand
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technical skills, It has become a dream for most
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the
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professionals to settle abroad. Some people are of the view that with its benefits, there
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certain downside
also
of working in a foreign
country
which will be elaborated in
further
passages.
To begin
with, working off-shore definitely has many advantages which
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lucrative benefits attached to the particular
job
, gaining of global exposure and most importantly better lifestyle with
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balance. To exemplify,
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working in India for 10 to 12 hours a day would be earning way less than a professional working in a developed
country
like
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States of America due to fixed remuneration for defined working hours being followed in
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country
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advantages, clearly we cannot afford to ignore the demerits. The initial years of working abroad
brings
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about different kind of struggles like language barrier, unfamiliarity with work culture,
home sickness
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and in
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situation, many people face racism which results in demotivation while performing
job
responsibilities at their respective
work places
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workplaces

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. In conclusion, it can very well
inferred
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that even though working abroad has its positive benefits and many professionals
look out
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for opportunities in moving miles away from their native
country
, it is advisable that they should essentially be well prepared in facing and eventually winning over few hurdles in achieving their dreams.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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