Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’. How true do you think this statement is ? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?
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a traffic
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taffic
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a taffic
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the traffic
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television
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requesting
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vehicles
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same
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the same
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pollution
traffic
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jam
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population
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the population
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the nation
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short
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a short
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for all.Correct your spelling
beneficial
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