Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, big cities have become so congested that it is causing a myriad of problems which are adversely affecting not only the

city

dwellers

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but

also

visitors as well. I believe that one way of solving

this

problem is for these huge

businesses

and industrial establishments to

transfer

to the suburbs. In

this

essay, I will explain how the advantages are more weighty than

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the disadvantages. The

transfer

of big

businesses

and industries outside of the

city

will decongest the

city

since their corporate headquarters, as well their thousands of employees

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will be relocated outside the

city

.

This

will ultimately result in

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cars clogging the

city

streets,

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commuters and,

consequently

,

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traffic jams. Still another advantage to the relocation of corporations and industries outside the

city

is the benefit to the

city

’s environment and people's health.

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cars and commuters together with lesser industrial pollutants equate to lesser emission resulting in a cleaner and greener atmosphere and a healthy citizenry. The

transfer

to the suburbs will stimulate the economic growth of areas outside the

city

. The move of these companies will create a demand for commercial, as well as, residential land and will likely spur people to put up

businesses

to accommodate the needs of these

businesses

and their employees. There are certain cons to the move

such

as it might cause stress on the family’s income and lifestyle to have to move to another place which might,

for instance

, be farther than the schools of the children. Overall, I believe that there is more to be gained by the

transfer

of big

businesses

outside

city

limits.