Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, big cities have become so congested that it is causing a myriad of problems which are adversely affecting not only the

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visitors as well. I believe that one way of solving

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problem is for these huge

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and industrial establishments to

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to the suburbs. In

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the disadvantages. The

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of big

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and industries outside of the

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will decongest the

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since their corporate headquarters, as well their thousands of employees

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will be relocated outside the

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.

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will ultimately result in

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cars clogging the

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streets,

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commuters and,

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traffic jams. Still another advantage to the relocation of corporations and industries outside the

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is the benefit to the

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’s environment and people's health.

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cars and commuters together with lesser industrial pollutants equate to lesser emission resulting in a cleaner and greener atmosphere and a healthy citizenry. The

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to the suburbs will stimulate the economic growth of areas outside the

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. The move of these companies will create a demand for commercial, as well as, residential land and will likely spur people to put up

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to accommodate the needs of these

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and their employees. There are certain cons to the move

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as it might cause stress on the family’s income and lifestyle to have to move to another place which might,

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, be farther than the schools of the children. Overall, I believe that there is more to be gained by the

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of big

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outside

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limits.