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Nowadays many people believe that children should be taught history in schools, however, others argue that children should learn subjects that are more helpful for modern everyday life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nobody would dispute the fact that children should attend
school
.There are people who believe that youngsters should be taught history more rather
then
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than
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 other
subjects
.
However
, others think that children should be taught new
subjects
 that will help them in the future life.I reckon that in
school
 all
subjects
 are important.In
this
 essay, I am going to discuss both sides and give my relevant opinion on them. On the one hand, I can understand those who are saying that schools should teach modern
subjects
.Nowadays technologies are increasing rapidly and schoolchild
need
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needs
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 to know how to use them.
For example
, the companies more and more need programmers and the
school
 could help pupils to prepare them for
this
 future jobs.
In addition
, youngsters have
to
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too
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much
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many
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subjects
 that are not interesting for them and they are not needed in their future jobs which leads to
waisting
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wasting
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 time.
On the other hand
, I reckon that teachers should teach all
subjects
 including history which is very important for schoolkid.
Moreover
, we should provide children with those lessons that will be interesting and won't overload students.
For example
, I used to hate those lessons
such
 as history and literature but now I understand that I wasn't right because
this
 information could prevent mistakes in my later life.
Furthermore
, teachers should encourage youngsters to learn more lessons and be intelligent. To sum up, we should create
such
shedules
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schedules
 that students will be interested in and they will enjoy every minute in
school
.
Also
, I believe that if humans know more the richer they are.
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