Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subject like Science and Technology are more important that History. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Studying different topics at school is widely offered in many countries.
Although
history
is considered as one of the most vital subjects by some individuals, others believe that school children should learn
science
as well as
technology
rather than
history
nowadays. In my opinion, based on living in a fast-paced era, learning
science
and
technology
is much more important to be considered in
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curriculum.
History
can connect the past to the present in different ways. Learning about
history
is very important for people in order to know the civilization. It is the symbol of every nations’ identities. We know more about our origins and cultures as well as our ancestors’ attempts to gain
this
peaceful life. In
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learning from past main events can be very useful for the new generations. By knowing
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more about the past,
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fewer mistakes can be done at the present. The more people know about their past events the more logical decisions they make in every
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of life. It can help youngsters to be
a good leaders
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in the
future
. There are other
argue
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about the importance of learning
science
and
technology
. Many students study
science
or
technology
to
be ensure
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about their
future
jobs. One of the main
aim
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of going to schools and
academicals
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education is to get
a secure occupations
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a secure occupation
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. These days the latest inventions
such
as computers and different medical achievements are the results of
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studying various
science
subjects like chemistry as well as engineering majors.
Science
and
technology
are associated with many different fields and the scientists’ achievements which have resulted in
better
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lifestyle. In my point of view,
Science
and
technology
are more important than
history
.
History
is about the past while
technology
is about the
future
.
Moreover
, there are not enough job vacancies for those who
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studied
history
and being jobless makes lots of drawbacks. In conclusion,
although
some think that
history
is much more important than
science
and
technology
, I do strongly think that these days knowing about
science
and
technology
is more necessary for a better life in the
future
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial
  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
  • legacy
  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
  • promote
  • facilitate
  • prosperity
  • enhance
  • foster
  • foundation
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