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In many countries, plastic containers have become more popular than ever. They are used in many businesses such as the food and drink industry. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?

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The issue of whether
plastics
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 are used more than ever in the food and drink industry has been raising a lot of debates. Some might say that
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 leads to negative effects on human’s lives
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 as the environment being polluted.
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, others insist on the opinion that it is convenient to
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plastic
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 containers because it is flexible and durable. Viewing from a general perspective, I personally agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.
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 with, the usage of
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 has a damaging effect on the habitat because it is hard to break up and exist for a long time.
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, the environmental population can be created by throwing garbage which is made of
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.
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, the food and drink corporation which is necessary for people so that they
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 it every day, what happens if day by day a lot of rubbish is thrown into the environment while it gets so much time to reduce itself.
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, animals are infuriated by
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 containers that the crowd release into the habitat.
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, after consumption, if someone who is not aware of protecting the earth throws it into a river or sea, it leads to many fish or turtles maybe eating it that threatens their health.
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, there is no doubt that using material which is take a large of time to decompose can bring a detrimental on our health by bound make it.
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, some of the population think that it is suitable to
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plastics
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 in the business of food or drink because it is convenient and weighs less than others,
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 material is cheaper than the one which is made of glass or terracotta.
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, we can
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 organic matter
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 of continuing to
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plastic
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 to keep nature safe. In conclusion,
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 containers are highly economical, though they damage the environment that far outweighs
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 beneficial effect.
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, people should not
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 it in industry and find new matter like paper or rice flour or something like that in order to save the world.
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