Theoretical subjects such as mathematics and philosophy are taught in universities but students prefer more practical subjects such as accounting and computer programming. Some people believe theoretical subjects should be abandoned in universities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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argue that non-practical curriculums should be dismissed in higher education.
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engage a whole host of time to entail, I believe they are essential for tertiary
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. Theoretical studies are the foundation of practical ones.
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and foremost, without the basic comprehension of mathematics, no other subject could be developed.
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majors, especially, involves various applications of math as their base.
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, societies
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subjects
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reply on
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to advance to
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areas
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as financial product engineering.
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, math and philosophy are imperative to cultivate logical thinking.
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foster young
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' abilities to tackle future problems and obstacles.
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, if interested in
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career, young scholars will
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benefit
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training.
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, learners often find it
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of time for these
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academic
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. They are
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hard to apprehend and have less impact on taking up practical skills. Calculus and Macroeconomy, which are
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mandatory
in business schools,
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, are less connected to the real world.
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,
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could accumulate their experiences for excelling
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without understanding difficult theories. Accounting and smartphone app programming,
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, emphasis more on actual know-how which applied to practice. These are all attributed to
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career-focus society and
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few university
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are studying for advanced research. In conclusion, logic training curriculums could pave
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student's
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area of practical
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, so
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aim for practical skills should spend time on the foundation in order to forge
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elite future.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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