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The future, the main reason for going to shopping mall will be for entertainment, not to shop. Do you agree or disagree.

#future #reason #mall #entertainment #shop
In
this
 modern era, most
people
 are addicted through shopping habit. Today generation is only changed shopping is one kind of entertainment compared to ever before.
However
, a fair amount of
people
 think that in the future
people
 will go to
shopping
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the shopping
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mall
 will get entertainment but not to shop. I strongly agree with
this
 statement for various reasons
such
 as stress
relax
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relaxation
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 and getting fun. I will
discusses
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in
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 details in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
 with, the main reason is the future
people
 will go to
shopping
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the shopping
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mall
 for will reduce their stress level because
this
 kind of place will provide more happiness and
enthusiasim
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enthusiasm
therefore
,
this
mall
 will
attarct
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attract
 more folks in different kinds of facilities
such
 as
Cinima
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Cinema
 hall,
Acquarium
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Aquarium
,
childrens
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children
children's
 playing indoor activity games.
For example
,
in
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apply
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India
capital
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the capital
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 city which is New Delhi has more shopping
mall
 with seven floors but
grand
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the grand
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 floor only available for shopping
goods
 other remaining floors are available for entertainment-purpose
such
 as
Theature
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Theatre
, book
exibihition
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exhibition
 and etc.
Moreover
, another main reason is taking fun from shopping
mall
 due to technology because in the
next
 generation folks will purchase all kinds of
goods
 from online platform
therefore
, they will not go to
mall
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the mall
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 for
shop
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the shop
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this
 means they will go for taking fun-oriented
such
 as playing indoor games and participating any cultural activity.
For instance
, a recent survey said that most shopping malls are closing due to the folks expect more from the
mall
such
 as not only for
goods
 but
also
 needs some leisure activity
as a result
, some malls are closed when without satisfying their customer needs and wants. To conclude, in the
next
 year community will go to
shopping
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the shopping
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mall
 for taking fun and enjoying themselves.
Besides
, they will never go
for
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to
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 purchase the
goods
 in
shooping
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shopping
 malls. I hope
this
 situation will increase automatically because the community expectation
are
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is
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 not stable often will flexible.
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