Nowadays governments are investing more in public transport such as buses and trains rather than in building new roads. What are reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

Today governments intended to invest in
development
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the development
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of public
transport
rather than increasing
number
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the number
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of roads or their capacity.
This
is explained mainly by economic, social and environmental benefits which public
transport
investments have over
new
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roads construction approach. So, the positive sides of that development will be shown while explaining these benefits․ Public
transport
is critical in maximizing productivity and competitiveness due to the fact that it reduces the negative impact of one of the great productivity bottlenecks of developed economies: urban congestion. Public
transport
probably is the fastest, safest, and cheapest way to connect to work, family, and social activities,
hence
providing the opportunity by moving skills,
labor
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and knowledge within and between markets.
That is
the population of the country can get to their
desirable
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locations
such
as work, studies or social facilities quicker, generate wealth and spend money more and increase GDP.
For example
, the American Public
Transport
Association estimates that for every $ 1 billion invested in public
transport
infrastructure, 36,000 jobs are created, in turn generating over $ 3 billion in commercial transactions and approximately $ 500 million in government tax revenues. Investing in public
transport
is not only more profitable in economic aspect but
also
is considered as a positive development because of reducing air pollution and social isolation. During peak periods, public
transport
(bus and rail) is up to six times less
emission intensive
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per
passenger
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passenger-kilometre
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kilometer
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than private vehicles.
Besides
that, low-income earners, the unemployed, the elderly and people with a disability are particularly at risk of social isolation
as a result
of poor
transport
options as often it is the only means to access vital services especially for the elderly.
For instance
, my friend’s grandmother suffered a lot on her way to
hospital
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the hospital
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because she had been waiting too long for a bus which was unlikely to happen in
case
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the case
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of developed public transportation. Taking into account the benefits that investments in public
transport
provides
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, we can conclude that the governments are making
reasonable
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a reasonable
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decision on
this
issue.
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