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"According to those in the travel business, the nature of the average 'holiday' is changing. Rather than seeking a relaxing break in a far-away place, people now want excitement on their holidays and are keen to participate in unusual and challenging activities. Do you agree or disagree?"

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Holiday breaks are often considered pipe dreams for some young adults, who have to deal with demanding jobs. Nowadays, a growing number of
people
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 who are working in travel agencies argue that the way
people
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 spend their holidays is completely different than in the past.
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 of visiting tourist attractions located a thousand miles away, the majority of them prefer to experience novel
activities
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 in a place
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 closer to their abode. I strongly agree with
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 statement because those
activities
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 could provide
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 experience for them.
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, the reason why I believe taking part in uncommon
activities
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 has become increasingly prevalent is that young adults want to get novel experiences from their short breaks. By and large, these
activities
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 could refresh their minds,
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, it could reduce their stress levels without spending a huge sum of money. Perhaps a great example of
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 is glamping, which is currently mushrooming in my home country. Despite the fact that it offers luxurious camping experiences, the offered price is quite budget-friendly for many
people
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.
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, it is commonly taking place at the outskirt of megacities,
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,
people
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 can commute easier either by private vehicles or mass transportations. Another reason would be to find priceless excitement by doing extreme
activities
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. Obviously,
people
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 who have a nerve of steel dare to do some extreme sports. In Jakarta,
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, a lot of
people
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 spend their holiday with their family and bosom friends in a place called Puncak for rafting.
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,
people
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 tend to spend their typical weekend
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doing some challenging sports rather than
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 abroad. To sum up, as far as I am concerned, brand-new types of relaxing
activities
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, which new and challenging, are becoming more popular these days. Unfamiliar and stimulating experiences are some of the primary causes of
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 trend which may lead to alteration of a conventional means of holidays.
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