You recently celebrated a special occasion in your personal life and received a card and a present from your colleagues at work. Write a letter to your colleagues. In your letter: remind your colleagues what the special occasion you were celebrating was thank them for the card and gift explain why you like the gift and how you will use it

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Dear Mr Sharma and Mr Chawla, I am writing to thank you both for sending me a beautiful card and a surprise present

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my 1st wedding anniversary. It was completely unexpected when the courier boy arrived at our house to deliver your gift and he

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sang a romantic song for us. I did not know that you were so thoughtful and observant about my fondness for travelling and exploring various cities in India. We were amazed to open the box of joy which had a

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travel package to the Andaman and Nicobar Islands. We both love beaches and nature so it was a perfect destination for

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combination, and we have never visited

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place before.We thank you from the bottom of our

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for making our day even more special. We searched on the Internet for numerous places we can visit on

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Island and creating our itinerary for

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wonderful trip. We will share the pictures and videos of our journey once we are back. I look forward to sharing my experience with you and once again thanks a ton for the surprise. Yours sincerely, Jasmine Kaur

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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