Some people believe the aim of University education is to help graduates get better job others believe there are much wider benefits of University application for both the individuals in society

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Some individuals opine that the main goal of
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university
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for the students is to find
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highly
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success
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jobs.
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, others opine that institutes have
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aim for the scholars that will help the society and others. Both statements have
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strengths and in the forthcoming paragraphs discuss both perspectives in my point of view. Every
graduates
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have only one aim is to get better jobs which gives them a good package according to their study. To
fulfill
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this
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dream of a
student
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, it is
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or
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officials to provide them
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job.
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the reason, many colleges have recruitment cell. In
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apply
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for
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after graduation or in the
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semester
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administration
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a job placement service. The companies
comes
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to
university
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for hiring
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fresher. It is
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great opportunity for them.
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, in a recent study in India, the top most colleges have a link with the top 10 companies in India.
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the end of
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, companies hired
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talented
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from
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colleges and provide them
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huge salary and other benefits.
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, others
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that
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is not only responsible for giving jobs,
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but it is also
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more than
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. In the
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, many activities held and organised by teachers to promote community activity. It teaches the
student
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to help
needy
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person. It makes the
student
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more culture and
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about other people too not for only themself.
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activity started from the school days
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as cleaning their classroom and school. It creates
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discipline in the children. If the
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does more than
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study
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useful for the society, it is only done by the institute because a
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spend
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more time in
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rather than
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home
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the home
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. In conclusion,
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a graduation
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degree must provide
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a job
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to a
student
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but a good citizen improved their society.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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