Some people believe the aim of University education is to help graduates get better job others believe there are much wider benefits of University application for both the individuals in society
Some individuals opine that the main goal of
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university
for the students is to find Add an article
the university
a
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apply
highly
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high
success
jobs. Replace the word
successful
However
, others opine that institutes have Linking Words
higher
aim for the scholars that will help the society and others. Both statements have Correct article usage
a higher
own
strengths and in the forthcoming paragraphs discuss both perspectives in my point of view.
Every Correct pronoun usage
their own
graduates
have only one aim is to get better jobs which gives them a good package according to their study. To Change to a singular noun
graduate
fulfill
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fulfil
this
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student
, it is Use synonyms
college
or Use synonyms
university
officials to provide them Use synonyms
a
job. Add the preposition
with a
That is
the reason, many colleges have recruitment cell. In Linking Words
this
, Linking Words
candidate
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the candidate
apply
for Change the verb form
applies
a work
after graduation or in the Remove the article
work
a job
last
semester Linking Words
then
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Use synonyms
college
administration Correct article usage
the college
organize
a job placement service. The companies Change the verb form
organizes
comes
to Change the verb form
come
university
for hiring Use synonyms
the
fresher. It is Correct article usage
apply
the
great opportunity for them. Correct article usage
a
For example
, in a recent study in India, the top most colleges have a link with the top 10 companies in India. Linking Words
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the end of Change the preposition
At
year
, companies hired Add an article
the year
a
talented Correct article usage
apply
student
from Use synonyms
the
colleges and provide them Correct article usage
apply
a
huge salary and other benefits.
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with a
However
, others Linking Words
thinks
that Change the verb form
think
college
is not only responsible for giving jobs, Use synonyms
it is
more than Add the word(s)
but it is also
this
. In the Linking Words
university
, many activities held and organised by teachers to promote community activity. It teaches the Use synonyms
student
to help Use synonyms
needy
person. It makes the Add an article
a needy
student
more culture and Use synonyms
think
about other people too not for only themself. Change the verb form
thinks
This
activity started from the school days Linking Words
such
as cleaning their classroom and school. It creates Linking Words
the
discipline in the children. If the Correct article usage
apply
student
does more than Use synonyms
only
study Change the article
the only
that is
useful for the society, it is only done by the institute because a Linking Words
student
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spend
more time in Change the verb form
spends
college
rather than Use synonyms
in
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at
home
.
In conclusion, Add an article
the home
a home
graduation
degree must provide Correct article usage
a graduation
job
to a Correct article usage
a job
student
but a good citizen improved their society.Use synonyms
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...