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The line graphs illustrate tons of
time
 is spent with parents by children in various
age
groups
. We can be seen that the three different
age
groups
 (under 1
age
 ,4-5 and 8-9) spend roughly 2
hours
 for the
father
, compared to 5
hours
 with the mom during the weekdays. The remaining
age
groups
 take around 1.5
hours
 with fathers whereas approximately 6
hours
 with mothers from Monday to Friday. At the same period , all
of
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age
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the age
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groups
 in children play with both mothers and
father
, which is 1.5 - 2
hours
. It is clear that the most
time
 of parents is set aside for toddlers who are all of
age
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groups
 about 5 - 6
hours
. In comparison with mothers, around 3 to 4
hours
.
However
, the number of
father
 look after infants the
least
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time
 ( only 0.5 to 1
hours
 ) on Saturday and Sunday. In conclusion, the infants play with their mother most of the
time
 during the week rather than their
father
.
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