The diagrams below show the design for a wave energy machine and its location.
The pictures depict the construction of wave-energy equipment to produce
a
large electricity.
It can be seen from the first picture below, the equipment contains two chambers which Remove the article
apply
is
located on the above body machine , Correct subject-verb agreement
are
the
other one is lower. Correct word choice
and the
To begin
with, the wave in the ocean enters the lower of
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the
chamber Correct article usage
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due to
the fact that the water level rise
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rises
as well as
generates an amount of airflow inside the machine. After that, the air is pushed up into the chamber above that turns the turbines led
to electric generation. Simultaneously, the air goes down Wrong verb form
leading
in
from outside to cause moving the turbine.
As is shown in the Change preposition
apply
second
diagram, when the wave energy machines are placed the different location
that it brings Fix the agreement mistake
locations
the
different pros and cons. To be more precise, the wave-energy system is set up far away from the land to collect an enormous wave. Correct article usage
apply
This
is a reason why the amount of energy generated and the installation is
high . Correct subject-verb agreement
are
On the other hand
, the equipment is built close to the store, which is a smaller cost than the off-store location. However
, the disadvantage thing entering small waves led to creating a lower outputSubmitted by caomyphuong3004 on
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