The diagrams below show the design for a wave energy machine and its location.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave energy machine and its location.
The pictures depict the construction of wave-energy equipment to produce
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large electricity. It can be seen from the first picture below, the equipment contains two chambers which
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located on the above body machine ,
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other one is lower.
To begin
with, the wave in the ocean enters the lower
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chamber
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generates an amount of airflow inside the machine. After that, the air is pushed up into the chamber above that turns the turbines
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to electric generation. Simultaneously, the air goes down
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from outside to cause moving the turbine. As is shown in the
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that it brings
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different pros and cons. To be more precise, the wave-energy system is set up far away from the land to collect an enormous wave.
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high .
On the other hand
, the equipment is built close to the store, which is a smaller cost than the off-store location.
However
, the disadvantage thing entering small waves led to creating a lower output
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