In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment.what factors may have caused this situation ,and what in your opinion what should ne done?

We are living in
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over crowded
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world.There are a significant number of countries where
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people
are not getting the work.There
are
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number
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of restaurants for
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First
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for unemployment in many regions is
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growing population which
consequently
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competition.
Opputunities
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Opportunities
are not increasing as the rate of population.
Thus
it leads to
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between employees and employers.
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country like India is having a large amount of population. If there is a vacancy for ten
people
thousand
people
will be available and apply for it. Ultimately only ten
people
have a chance to get a job. Another unavoidable reason is a lack of practical knowledge. Every year thousands of students
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degree
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from various institute or universities. Passing the exam from school shows academic skills of one but in the real world technical skills plays
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role. Some professions like
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dentist
dentistry
,therapist and doctors demand highly developed skills. Nowadays some of the freshly pass out students do not have
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knowledge of
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subject.
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, one has got
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degree
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dentist
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the dentist
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. He has all the theoretical knowledge
however
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it leads to unemployment. I believe that government should take strict measures to decrease the rate of unemployment . Government should focus on
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the opening
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of
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employment agencies.
Additionally
,one should try to improve the virtues that can help to get a job.
Also
, universities should organise campus interviews more frequently.
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