The ownership of car should be restricted to one per family in order to reduce traffic congestion and pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is a common observation these days that usually a family owns two or three

cars

for their

transport

as it provides ease for everyone out there.

However

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this

is creating a mess with

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environment

envoirnment

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and is

continuosly

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continuously

increasing the load of traffic. In my

opinion

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having

this

much

transport

is actually

destuctive

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destructive

to human health and

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agree that car ownership should be regulated

First

of all, the air pollution caused by these

cars

is something

that is

hazardous to our lungs

specially

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for the children who have been exposed to it since early childhood. Gases produced by fuel combustion has a long term deadly effect on our ozone and

this

is eventually leading to

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green house

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effects on our planet. So as a matter of fact we are destroying

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mother nature and its other inhabitants just for the sake of our comfort. Not only

this

we are giving our future generations a much worse place to stay than we got from our forefathers Other

then

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pollution,

lot

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and

lot

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of using

such

transport

is making our life more sedentary and unhealthy. Since we are not ready to walk for a few miles by our feet now because of the availability of multiple

cars

at home, obesity is becoming a part of our family, which is itself bad

to

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our health in many ways. In a recent

article

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have

been come

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across it was shown that obesity

have

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risen to 20% in our population in recent years and a major part of it is because of lack of walk

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the traffic jams and congestion

that is

a

by product

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of

this

transport

system. Roads are packed

as a result

of multiple

cars

moving to their destinies

specially

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at school and office hours, which is putting everyone at risk of getting late and

specially

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emergency services

transport

like ambulances and firefighters are

verge

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of losing precious time. Along with

this

, traffic overload

also

causes a huge amount to maintain the roads for use. So if we want to reduce

this

air

pollutuon

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pollution

for us and for our coming generations and want to live a healthy balanced life we must adhere to keep one car per family policy in working.

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is indeed need

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of time to adhere to it as it is beneficial for our roads and our own health and should start walking and taking public

transport

as it can safe our lovely earth