Many people are now opting to provide technology companies with their personal data in exchange for access to software? Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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of people
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nowadays
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provide IT companies with their personal information to gain free access to
software
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the software
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. Advantages do outweigh the drawbacks because
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essay argues that despite having more theft going on the internet and
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having more fake
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to fulfil their missions, there are other websites that are good and real because they have given room for job employment opportunities and security purposes. On the
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hand, it is not recommended to give your information for
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to get permission to use the site because many users have been frauded online.
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password all through their
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including bank
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. They try and successfully hack these
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and get passwords which they use and withdraw money from
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without
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knowledge.
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is left bankrupt.
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, criminals use these
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to undertake their operations.
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, they do fake,
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pretending to be who they are not and
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fulfil their missions.
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, in Dursit hotel in Kenya, an employee gave out information to someone who seemed to be a client but in
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sense was not and
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restaurant was attacked.
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, it is advisable to be careful with the websites we sign in
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, giving out your profile to get access to the net is good because it has led to more jobs being granted. Many companies are now using online platform to advertise vacancies in their organisations.
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has led to many being employed
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that, it has reduced
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of insecurity in
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society.
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,
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week a bus driver
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on a video online humiliating a woman and
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made policemen
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arrest him. By
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, it is clear that
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is able to upload any crime at any time and police will swift in action.
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,
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crimes being detected. In conclusion,
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having thieves online and
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offenders, there are more benefits because unemployment has decreased significantly in
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society and security is enhanced. Individuals have now decided to provide
internet
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with their personal data .
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