Many people are now opting to provide technology companies with their personal data in exchange for access to software? Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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of people

now days

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nowadays

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provide IT companies with their personal information to gain free access to

software

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the software

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. Advantages do outweigh the drawbacks because

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essay argues that despite having more theft going on the internet and

also

having more fake

accounts

to fulfil their missions, there are other websites that are good and real because they have given room for job employment opportunities and security purposes. On the

one

hand, it is not recommended to give your information for

one

to get permission to use the site because many users have been frauded online.

This

is by fact that many tend to have

same

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password all through their

accounts

including bank

accounts

. They try and successfully hack these

accounts

and get passwords which they use and withdraw money from

bank

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the bank

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without

owner's

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the owner's

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knowledge.

Therefore

,

one

is left bankrupt.

Additionally

, criminals use these

accounts

to undertake their operations.

In other words

, they do fake,

that is

pretending to be who they are not and

thus

fulfil their missions.

For example

, in Dursit hotel in Kenya, an employee gave out information to someone who seemed to be a client but in

actual

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sense was not and

this

restaurant was attacked.

However

, it is advisable to be careful with the websites we sign in

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On the other hand

, giving out your profile to get access to the net is good because it has led to more jobs being granted. Many companies are now using online platform to advertise vacancies in their organisations.

This

has led to many being employed

this

way. To add

on

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that, it has reduced

level

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the level

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of insecurity in

the

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society.

For example

,

last

week a bus driver

was captured

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on a video online humiliating a woman and

this

made policemen

to

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arrest him. By

this

, it is clear that

one

is able to upload any crime at any time and police will swift in action.

Therefore

,

less

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fewer

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crimes being detected. In conclusion,

although

having thieves online and

crime

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criminal

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offenders, there are more benefits because unemployment has decreased significantly in

the

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society and security is enhanced. Individuals have now decided to provide

internet

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the internet

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with their personal data .