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During holidays or weekends, young people spend less time on outdoor activities in the nature environment, such as hiking and mountain climbing. Why? What can be done to encourage them to go out?

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 a lot of
people
 prefer to spend their leisure
time
 in
countryside
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the countryside
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, but few of them are interested in
activities
 as hiking or mountain climbing. What is the problem? It is obvious, that kind of
activities
 demand to have corresponding physical conditions, but nowadays society does not care about it as much as required. Օne of the most common and effective ways to raise
people
’s awareness about the importance of physical activity in
nature
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 environment. Hiking and mountain climbing are
such
 type of
activities
 that are less preferable than others
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 because they take too much energy and
time
. A person should be physically healthy and strong to be able to walk about five hours continually or have strong enough arms to climb mountains. As many
people
 after forty are physically weak, the
amount
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 of interested
people
 in
such
 kind hobbies are less. As a matter of fact,
survey
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a survey
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 on how and where
people
 prefer to spend their weekends was held in Armenia and was found seventy
percent
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choose
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 spend leisure
time
 in cafes and city hotels than a day in nature.
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Society
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 less informed about advantages that be gained spending
time
 in wild nature. So, making some informational tours and practical lessons about hiking and climbing will
rise
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raise
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 the interest.
Moreover
,
this
 approach will make
a
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 imagination about
activities
 as they are not so widespread. On my own example, a year ago I read in
newspaper
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the newspaper
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 about a climbing tour to the Aragact and I participated in it to satisfy my interest, so after that day I found a new incredible interesting hobby for me.
Accordingly
, outdoor
activities
such
 as hiking and mountain claiming are less popular as not everyone is able to do it,
therefore
 raising informational awareness about positive aspects can
rise
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raise
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 interest in
thrm
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them
that
charm
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