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Computer games are very popular for all ages and nationalities. Parents think this has little educational value and it will be harmful for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, children are obsessed with computer
games
, which has become a serious concern for parents. They think that it has no value in education. At the same time, it has many negative effects. I am a strong advocate of
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 argument and shed some light on
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 topic. On the one hand, playing video
games
 is not helpful for academic activities. The addictive nature of these
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 not inculcate any cognitive skills
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 the youth. Actually, it
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 those skills. Oftentimes, these
games
 could cloud the minors’ judgement and make their rational thinking unstable.
For instance
, studies reveal that juveniles who are addicted to aggressive
games
, later develop violent behaviours.
On the other hand
,
this
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 many damaging impacts. Sitting in front of a computer screen definitely affect their eye
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. And
also
,
this
 limits or perhaps, restrict their time for physical activities
such
 as outdoor functions and sports. Educationalists fear that even a toddler playing with a smart mobile phone for a considerable time period
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 will cause to
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 growth and motor development. To conclude, digital sports do not improve children’s performance in academics. It has devastating externalities.
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