You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor: explain your position apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter requesting you to change my interview schedule. Recently
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have applied for a course in your college and the initial rounds of discussions were completed and the final face-to-face interview was scheduled in the coming week Thursday at 3 pm.I have a doctor's
appoinment
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appointment
on the exact day which is at 1 pm and
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was informed today morning that the
time
was revised from 2 to 2.30 pm due to
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emergency surgery.So, I will not be able to come to your place in
such
a short
time
from the hospital. With my sincere apologies, I would like to request you to allow me to come on the
next
day at the same
time
or
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may be
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in the evening of the same day, whichever is feasible as
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really do not miss
this
opportunity.
Also
,I am interested in knowing the
time
duration for the personal discussion and
also
any possible written exams followed by one-on-one discussion so that I can plan my schedule
accordingly
. Yours Faithfully, Hari Sunkara
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