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The charts below show proportion of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition English, in 2000 and 2010.

The charts below show proportion of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition English, in 2000 and 2010.
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Two pie charts reveal
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the percentages of British
students
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 studying in a university in the United Kingdom
were
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 capable of conversating in languages other than the English
language
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 during the
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year
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years
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 2000 and 2010.
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, it is evident that the proportion of
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students
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, who can communicate in one or two more languages, apart from English has increased by 5 per cent each in the later
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 compared to the earlier.
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, we can clearly see a 50% decline in the number of
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 who could speak only
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the English
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 during the same time span.
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 who could speak only the Spanish
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 showed a rise of 5% in the
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 2010 which was 30% in the
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 2000. The German speakers remained unchanged at 10
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cent,
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 the French speakers went down by 5%. The combined percentages of
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students
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 who could communicate in more than one
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 were 25% of the whole in the
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 2000, which became 35% in the
year
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 2010.
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