You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express
the
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dissatisfaction
about
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your food and service, which we got, during our
last
visit on 20th May 2021, Thursday. I visited your Palm Jumeirah branch with my family. It was a special day for us, as it was the 25th wedding anniversary of my parents, and we decided to treat them
at
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same
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place, where they met
first
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time. As you still serve their one of the
favorite
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food dishes, so we planned to order the same for them. Unfortunately, it took so long in bringing the order
at
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the table, and the reason
waiter
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was explaining that some of their staff is on leave today. Anyways, after
long
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wait, we found that food is so cold that one cannot enjoy eating it.
Also
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it has
bad
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smell seems not so fresh as we used to get before. I would like to advise you to take an action being a manager there, supervise the procurement of the vegetables and other stuff carefully, and try to serve the
fresh
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cooked cuisines as you used to do earlier.
This
will help you to keep the same taste, which can lead to retain old customers and attract many others. Look forward to
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back from you Best regards Chris
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