You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

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Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing

this

letter to express

the

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dissatisfaction

about

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your food and service, which we got, during our

last

visit on 20th May 2021, Thursday. I visited your Palm Jumeirah branch with my family. It was a special day for us, as it was the 25th wedding anniversary of my parents, and we decided to treat them

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same

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place, where they met

first

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time. As you still serve their one of the

favorite

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food dishes, so we planned to order the same for them. Unfortunately, it took so long in bringing the order

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the table, and the reason

waiter

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was explaining that some of their staff is on leave today. Anyways, after

long

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wait, we found that food is so cold that one cannot enjoy eating it.

Also

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it has

bad

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smell seems not so fresh as we used to get before. I would like to advise you to take an action being a manager there, supervise the procurement of the vegetables and other stuff carefully, and try to serve the

fresh

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cooked cuisines as you used to do earlier.

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will help you to keep the same taste, which can lead to retain old customers and attract many others. Look forward to

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back from you Best regards Chris

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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217 words

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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

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