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Many people believe that formal 'pen and paper' examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement. What is your view of examination?

#people #pen #paper #examinations #method #achievement #examination
Nowadays, more
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people
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 ‘pen and paper’
exams
is
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 not
good
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type
 of receiving educational achievement. I agree with that public opinion, and I will try to explain my point of view in that question.
First
, do not
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, every student or learner is a unique person, everyone
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a
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strong sides and
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weaknesses. Each person has a different
type
 of personality, psychological
type
.
For example
, there are introverted students, there are
also
 extraverts. Everyone has
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special thinking, and I think paper
exams
 is
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not
ideal
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 format
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 educations level. ‘Pen and
paper’
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exams
 do not fully open a potential, it is just a pack of rules. In
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 word ‘rules’,
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 mean it is a not pure
type
 of education.
Moreover
, do not forget about
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 of the composition in these tests or
exams
. Many
of
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not
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 qualified educational workers composite not right variants of test questions, exercises and so on.
Second
, when students passing paper
exams
, many of them feeling themselves poorly. It is a big stress. There were many
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 cases around the world
,
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 when learners could not pass their valuable
exams
. I think in all educational settings, in every country should work
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professional psychologists, they must provide
a special lessons
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 with students, need to
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 explain all things. In conclusion, I think
paper based
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exams
 are not
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a
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another
type
 of marking
criterias
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criteria
. Important to find a good balance, make
a good conditions
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