One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, an increasing number of

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have become to live in large

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rather than rural

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, and

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causes heavy

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in urban

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reasons behind

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and examine possible ways to address it.

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causes behind

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, overpopulation of large

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and depopulation in the countryside is a major reason for

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. Since there are few jobs in the countrysides,

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move out to large

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and look for jobs that pay better salaries.

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, the city population has increased and

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congestion happens.

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, another reason for

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commuting

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. In general,

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commute to their office at the same hours, around 8 to 9.

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leads to public transportations

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as train fully packed. I believe that there are

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possible ways to address

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issues. The

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solution is to enhance moving to rural

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. As with overpopulation in large

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is a severe

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, depopulation in rural

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is critical.

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, if

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are able to a find well-paid job in the countryside, around half of the Japanese population want to live there. Another solution is to vary

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. In fact, the most remarkable

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jam is caused by

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who commute to their office. Varying

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of commuting will result in an ease

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jam in the morning and the evening. To conclude, there are

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causes which are overpopulation in large

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and commuting. To solve

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problem

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, it is better to move rural

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and decrease the population of large

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, and varying commuting

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is

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effective.